Hi Emily. One thing off the bat that I suggest is to embed your thing link into Blogger because I was having trouble accessing the back of your butterfly. From the front side, I liked how you were very explicit and well explained inside your interpretational tags. Your tags were well written. Also, one thing I would suggest is to start off the topic sentence with, 'one piece of imagery on my butterfly based off the poem is...' Instead of just writing 'imagery-'. Otherwise, great job overall.
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Hi Emily. One thing off the bat that I suggest is to embed your thing link into Blogger because I was having trouble accessing the back of your butterfly. From the front side, I liked how you were very explicit and well explained inside your interpretational tags. Your tags were well written. Also, one thing I would suggest is to start off the topic sentence with, 'one piece of imagery on my butterfly based off the poem is...' Instead of just writing 'imagery-'. Otherwise, great job overall.
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